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23rd February 2002 at 8:02 am #38562SadGeezerKeymaster
“THE NETELOUS”
In the distant future an unstoppable machine called the Netelous is quickly converting everything in the universe for a purpose known to it and one other. When one of the Netelous navigators is abducted by the last survivor of converted planet he is forced to face the horrific truth about his true role aboard the Netelous and his abductor will find something even more destructive than the Netelous. Together they will travel a dark path and learn the true origin and the real purpose behind the Netelous’s destructive mission. But will the truth they discover be more devastating than the Netelous its self. Its a race against time as they attempt to uncover the truth as our universe is drawn nearer its end.
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By the way before anyone starts drawing simularities between this story and Lexx let me tell you its not Lexx and when I decide to post the story you will know its not Lexx.-SM
23rd February 2002 at 12:08 pm #62584AnonymousGuest[img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] cool i can’t wait [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]
24th February 2002 at 12:46 am #62585FlamegrapeParticipantHmmm! The part about “the Netelous is quickly converting everything in the universe for a purpose known to it and one other” sounds familiar….
[img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]Remember that in reality, the Mantrid drones would have needed countless millions of years to convert the Dark Universe into new drones.
But your story idea has the making for an epic!
24th February 2002 at 1:16 am #62586AnonymousGuestSounds interesting.
[ 23-02-2002: Message edited by: Praxilla ]
24th February 2002 at 11:15 am #62587AnonymousGuestquote:
Originally posted by Flamegrape:
Hmmm! The part about “the Netelous is quickly converting everything in the universe for a purpose known to it and one other” sounds familiar….
Yeah this story has real potential and I know it rings of Mantrid and his drones. However if as I said I ever get around to posting it you will quickly know its not that. Infact if you know anything about me the ending will be a real surprise, hehe.
-SM
24th February 2002 at 4:34 pm #62588AnonymousGuest[img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] FG, i have actually read the rough draft of this story and it really is nothing like Lexx! i did find it an interesting concept, but it was a rough draft and needed to be a more finished product. like i said before, i really am looking forward to the finished product. [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]
25th February 2002 at 9:29 am #62589AnonymousGuestquote:
Originally posted by mary beth:
[img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] FG, i have actually read the rough draft of this story and it really is nothing like Lexx! i did find it an interesting concept, but it was a rough draft and needed to be a more finished product. like i said before, i really am looking forward to the finished product. [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]
Hehe you are so privleged [img]images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img] Don’t worry I’ll get a more finished product out eventually.
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