Re:What do you want to read (Insperation required)

I have a rough draft of chapter 1 ready which I am going to post here for comments. This is the first piece of creative writing (other than my tax forms) that I have done for nearly 30 years so I need to be loaded on vodka before pushing that [Submit] button. 😳

Just need to shake of the final effects from the dodgy aardvark burger that laid me low last week, then I can drink alcohol again.